Three tanka published in one my very favorite journals.
GUSTS No. 28, Contemporary Tanka
(fall/winter 2018)
pounding rains
& the peonies are lost –
how did I miss
your pallor, your reticence
that last day?
turning from pale gold
to dusky violet
our last embrace
so certain
so final
rain patter
on windows –
just when it seems
the darkness is over
it all begins again
Absolutely exquisite.
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Thanks so much.
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Most welcome ❤
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Congratulations on these three lovely tonkas being published, Mary. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, dear Suzanne.
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Wow, Mary! So powerful!
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Thanks so much! 😊
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Oh! This sequence blew me away, Mary.
marion x
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It wasn’t a sequence but three separate tanka. I’m delighted they worked as a unit!! 😊💛
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They certainly did for me, Mary! 🙂
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Beautiful tanka.
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Thanks so much. 😊💛
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Beautiful and meaningful. What a lovely journal too.
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Thanks so much. 💛
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wow!!! stunning writing Mary
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Many thanks, Rachel. 💛
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