I had two senryu published in the March, 2016, issue 18 of Prune Juice, Journal of Senryu, Kyoka, Haibun & Haiga, edited by Steve Hodge. It’s a real honor to be published in this excellent journal.
The first is dedicated to my friend, Gale, who underwent brain surgery last fall. She handled it with such grace and her usual humor. She has recovered and is doing really well. This poem is for her:
scalp stapled shut–
your laughter as you
try on bright new hats
Senryu have a human element to them. They are often thought of as being humorous, but that is not always the case. They can be very serious as in the next poem. This poem is a one line senryu. It is dedicated to someone dear to me who is undergoing cancer treatment.
your tumor growing we worry about the snow
I hope you will explore all the writers in this issue of Prune Juice: https://prunejuice.files.wordpress.com/2016/03/pj-issue-18-march-1603.pdf
Both very beautiful and touching poems Mary! Touched me deeply as I am recovering from brain surgery myself. I wish both your friend and the person close to you well. Many thanks for sharing 🙂
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Karen, I wish you a thorough and positive recovery. 🙏🏼
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My thanks and all good wishes your way Mary. 🙂
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Both are very moving poems that have touched me deeply. Prayers to you and your friends.
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Thank you, Michelle for your kind words and your generous wishes. It means a lot to know my words worked in some way. ❤
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Nice.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Both are truly moving, Mary. — Suzanne
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Thanks so much. That means a lot to me. 💛
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Wow Mary, such powerfully poignant work
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Thank you, Rachel. 💛
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Great work – moving in only a few words. Congratulations!
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My thanks, Laine Anne. 💛
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Poignant. Both moved me greatly! Good work, Mary.
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Thanks so much, Barbara. 💛
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