My Train Whistle haiga was published in the April 2016 issue of Failed Haiku: A Journal of English Senryu, edited by Michael Rehling.
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Please view the whole issue of this wonderful journal: http://www.haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue4.pdf
My Train Whistle haiga was published in the April 2016 issue of Failed Haiku: A Journal of English Senryu, edited by Michael Rehling.
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Please view the whole issue of this wonderful journal: http://www.haikuhut.com/FailedHaikuIssue4.pdf
__Just this instant’s thought, to complement your fine haiga. _m
Owl’s echo; through this greening valley; a full brook.
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Thank you very much.
encore…
a rushing brook sings
aria after aria
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so very true!
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😊 Thanks, J.
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Fits right in with the March prompt!
http://poetsonline.blogspot.com/2016/03/prompt-sound-of.html
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It does! I missed reading last month’s prompt but must have been on the same wavelength since I created this Haiga a month ago. I need to get back to poets online!! 😊
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A train whistle at night can sound lonely, but I missed them when we moved to the country. Lovely piece, Mary. 🙂 — Suzanne
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My thanks, Suzanne. I hear them at night, especially in the winter.
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That was lovely! I don’t think those were failures at all!
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I don’t either.
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It just occurred to me that you might be new to senryu and its link with haiku. Michael Rehling, the editor of Failed Haiku: A Journal of English Senryu is using the term tongue in cheek. Senryu are an important part of authentic haiku. Senryu introduces a human element that can result in something humorous or very sad. Like haiku, it has its “Aha!” Moment if it is good. Read the journal and you will understand and fall in love with Senryu. Cheers!
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I was going to look it up. Thank you for doing the work for me!
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My pleasure. I’m delighted this interests you. 😊
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Love this, Mary. Reminded me of my childhood when I heard a train whistle each night right after lights out. The last sound of the day.
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Thank you, Sheppy. It’s both haunting and soothing, isn’t it?
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