Wild Strawberries
A Responsive tanka sequence
Mary Kendall (USA) & Hazel Hall (Australia)
around the turn
we come across a patch
of wild strawberries
. . . a sudden longing
for something left behind MK
dividing
our harvest carefully
the taste
of over-ripened fruit
lingers in the mouth HH
searching everywhere
for that old blue sweater
one dropped stitch
and a secret hidden
in worn woolen strands MK
unraveling
our future fears
. . . two sparrows
perched on the scarecrow
pull father’s scarf apart HH
somewhere in silence
lies an answer . . .
each spring the task
of double digging soil
before planting MK
wheel turning
I throw a new pot . . .
moulding hope
for the future,
a fragile process HH
Published in Ribbons, Winter 2018: Volume 14, Number 1
All are lovely. 🙂 — Suzanne
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My thanks.
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So Beautiful!
Each addition gently pulls the reader on
Thank you!
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Thanks, dear Sheppy.
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Beautiful combination. Congrats to Mary and Hazel!
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Many thanks.
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Trouble wit iPad …superb coordination yet each poem a gem in its own right! Such beauty…thank you for sharing
Sent from my iPad Joan Leotta Author, Story performer http://Www.joanleotta.wordpress.com
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Thanks, Joan. Writing with Hazel Hall was a great experience.
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Superb coordination, yet each poem a gem in its own right as well
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Thanks so much.
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