Wild Strawberries
A Responsive tanka sequence
Mary Kendall (USA) & Hazel Hall (Australia)
around the turn
we come across a patch
of wild strawberries
. . . a sudden longing
for something left behind MK
dividing
our harvest carefully
the taste
of over-ripened fruit
lingers in the mouth HH
searching everywhere
for that old blue sweater
one dropped stitch
and a secret hidden
in worn woolen strands MK
unraveling
our future fears
. . . two sparrows
perched on the scarecrow
pull father’s scarf apart HH
somewhere in silence
lies an answer . . .
each spring the task
of double digging soil
before planting MK
wheel turning
I throw a new pot . . .
moulding hope
for the future,
a fragile process HH
Published in Ribbons, Winter 2018: Volume 14, Number 1
All are lovely. 🙂 — Suzanne
My thanks.
So Beautiful!
Each addition gently pulls the reader on
Thank you!
Thanks, dear Sheppy.
Beautiful combination. Congrats to Mary and Hazel!
Many thanks.
Trouble wit iPad …superb coordination yet each poem a gem in its own right! Such beauty…thank you for sharing
Sent from my iPad Joan Leotta Author, Story performer http://Www.joanleotta.wordpress.com
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Thanks, Joan. Writing with Hazel Hall was a great experience.
Superb coordination, yet each poem a gem in its own right as well
Thanks so much.