In the past five months I have been studying my much beloved tanka, haiku and small poems in order to become a better writer. Writers–and poets–need to keep growing as they go. As part of my interest in these lovely small poem forms, I have joined a number of exception online groups of poets who post their own writing. On several of the sites, “prompts” are given and sometimes a picture is given. People respond as they wish or not. Often comments are given. I can’t tell you what a thrill it is to get a “like” or even a comment by one of these poets who are so gifted and accomplished tanka and/or haiku poets, but even without the ‘likes,’ it feels wonderful to be a little more confident about sharing poems publicly. This morning, I’m posting several tanka I wrote this week to specific prompts.
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1 [prompt: celebration of color]
scribbles
of scarlet red
in the shrubs—
two cardinals
take flight
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- [prompt: full moonrise, unforgettable moon]
cloud masquerade
tonight—
the moon is hidden
from your
wanton gaze
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3 [prompt: how you share your journey]
old cobblestones
so hard to cross—
without speaking
I take your arm
and we walk on
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4 [prompt: flutes..music…]
sweet song
hidden in the plum tree–
a nightengale
gives itself
away
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I know about the thrill of seeing that like.
These are lovely, I have not really gotten into writing tanka yet
Cheers
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Many thanks.
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Many thanks for this reblog. I’m honored that you chose to do so since I love your selections in photography, art, quotes, etc. Your site always leads me to looking at interesting things and people. Best wishes, my friend.
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So welcome!
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Love these -all of them!
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Thanks so much, dear Rosanna. 💕
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Delightful – challenges effortlessly met (or so it seems – probably not!)
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Thank you! I appreciate your taking time to share your thoughts. It means a lot to me. 💕
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Perfectly exquisite Mary – many congratulations on this work. H ❤
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Thank you, Hariod. I’m so pleased that you liked them. Enjoy every May morning…they offer so much. 💕
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Those were all lovely pieces, Mary. I especially liked the nightingale piece. I also enjoy writing using prompts. It gives my muse a little push. 🙂
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Sometimes our muses need a little push, just like us. 😋 I’m glad you liked these, Suzanne.
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Lovely tankas. Yes, cobblestones are indeed difficult to walk on.
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Thank you.
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These are lovely, Mary!
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Thank you so much. I’m delighted that you liked them, Barbara. 😊
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